Ode to the Mother
Recently, I participated in a poetry workshop lead by Rachel Neve Midbar for Ritualwell. After some of King David's beautiful Psalms were read aloud, the presenter gave us a prompt: Imagine the world will end in ten minutes, and we want to leave a last message; an ode to the end, if you will. We were given a limited set of words and phrases to employ, and twenty minutes in which to write. Akin to an artist determined to paint with a limited palette, we set to work. What followed was a stunning sharing session of artistic communication. I have posted my contribution below. Feel free to share, with attribution! I will also submit this poem to Ritualwell. I hope that it speaks to you.
Ode to the Mother
Before the end,
allow me a moment
of separation and memory.
The white fire that was lost,
may it frame us in it's flaming,
tender corona, so that:
we murmur
our phantom wilderness,
we shelter
the astonished purple Earth,
we gasp
in the sudden warm rain
of our wild daughters' love.
Yael Fischman, 2022
Yael I am so happy the class and the prompt touched you in this way and that you created this beautiful poem. I hope we can share poetry again soon!
U know I love ❤️ ur artwork. Ur poetry reaches me, as well. Thank You 🙏🏻 4 sharing it.